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Dreamcatcher Chap. 3: Pg. 17

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Oookay, just for the record, the paneling in this page is a little weird. I dunno what I was thinking.

The top 4 panels with theif kid read: top left, top right, bottom left, bottom right.
The bottom 4 with Riza go: Top left, bottom left, top right, bottom right.

I dunno, maybe you guys figured that out, but I thought it was a bit confusing. Sorry ^^;

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Don't worry about it, I followed it just fine, non-confusionish at all =) (Yes, I did just make that up, shush).
Although I'm assuming that Riza can now jump like super-highzor-like? Although I don't know how high she can jump now, maybe show a side-view of it? Although then it wouldn't be as actioney I guess. It's okay, it looks fine. Although if the third-to-last panel, the one where it shows a close-up of Riza's feet is showing her takeoff, it would be sending her right into the wall, it probably could be a little more vertical, but you were wanting to show the horizontal motion, so it's okay, just maybe a little too horizontal. Oh Noes! I'm being too critiquey again =( I'll stop now.
Great Job! *glomp*
*scampers off*